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Why would you do this father? by jessp118 Why would you do this father? by jessp118
This is half to go along with a story and half for vent art.

So here is Curt after his father attacked him for coming home while holding hands with another boy when he was 10.

Yes i know he is a horse but he is also human, I drew him as a horse here since I really dont want to atempt to draw a human.

Read the full story here: [link]

Curt (C) =jessp118
Art (C) =jessp118
Ok, hello. I happened to come across this picture and i decided to critique it. Ok, I rated the vision a 4.5, because the sky and blood seem so striking. But i also noticed that the horse blends into the background a little bit. I rated this 5 stars for originality, because it was all a pure idea, not traced or referenced. GREAT JOB!
I rated 4 stars for the technique because the anatomy is a little off. for example, the neck is just slightly too long for the rest of the body. the head it a little to big also, but the anatomy is still great. I also rated the impact a 5 stars, because you can feel the emotions coming off of the horse. I wish to see more work from you, you have great anatomy with horses.
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Submitted on
November 14, 2012
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